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How to write newsletters people actually read

Most newsletters never get opened. Here's what the best senders do differently — from subject lines to content structure, timing, and design.

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Hermod Team · AI-powered email marketing

The average newsletter has an open rate of 21%. That means 4 out of 5 recipients never see your content. The problem is rarely technical — it’s that the newsletter doesn’t give the recipient a reason to open it.

Newsletters people actually read have three things in common: a subject line that creates curiosity, content that delivers on the promise, and a sender the recipient trusts. This guide shows you how to achieve all three.

Subject lines: The 40 characters that decide everything

Your subject line is the only thing recipients see before they decide. You have roughly 40-60 characters and half a second to convince them.

What works (with data)

Curiosity without clickbait: “This one thing increased our conversion by 34%” outperforms “HUGE NEWS!!!” because it promises something specific without overselling.

Numbers and specific promises: Subject lines with numbers have 36% higher open rates on average, according to Campaign Monitor’s research. “5 email mistakes you’re making right now” beats “Email mistakes you should avoid.”

Personalization that makes sense: {{first_name}} in the subject line increases open rate by 10-14%, but only if the rest of the email is also personal. Otherwise it feels dishonest. Read more about personalization that goes beyond first names.

Lowercase and informal tone: “hey — have you seen this?” performs surprisingly well because it looks like a message from a friend, not a marketing department.

What doesn’t work

  • ALL CAPS — it’s a spam signature and can trigger spam filters
  • Too many emojis — one can work, three is too many
  • Vague promises — “Exciting news!” says nothing
  • Too-long subject lines — over 60 characters gets cut off on mobile, and 60%+ of opens happen on mobile

A/B test your subject lines

Never send an important email without testing the subject line. Split your list 50/50 and test two variants. Over time, you’ll build a database of what works for your specific audience.

Test one thing at a time:

  • Long vs. short
  • With numbers vs. without
  • Question vs. statement
  • With personalization vs. without

Do it every time. After 10 tests, you’ll know more about your audience than any industry report can tell you.

Content structure: Scannability is everything

People don’t read emails word by word. They scan. Your job is to make scanning easy — and catch them with the most important thing first.

The inverted pyramid

Journalists have used the inverted pyramid for over 100 years: most important thing first, then context, then details. It works in newsletters for the same reason — people stop reading at any point.

Lines 1-3: The main point. What’s the most important thing in this email? Say it immediately. Not “Today I want to talk about…” but straight into the substance.

Next paragraph: Context and proof. Why does it matter? What’s the data? What’s the example?

The rest: Details for those who want to know more. Deeper explanations, additional resources, secondary points.

Formatting that helps scanners

  • Short paragraphs — max 2-3 lines per paragraph
  • Bold text for key points — recipients scan for bold text
  • Bullet points for lists — always
  • Clear headings that tell what the section is about
  • One CTA — not three, not five, one primary action you want them to take

The single CTA rule

The best newsletters have one primary call-to-action. Not a button to the blog, one to the product, one to social media, and one to the webinar. One thing you want the recipient to do.

Multiple CTAs create decision paralysis. Studies show that emails with one CTA have 371% higher click-through rate than emails with multiple competing links, a finding supported by WordStream’s email marketing data.

Sender identity: Trust is built over time

People open emails from senders they trust. That trust is built over time — and can be lost with one bad email.

Consistency is key

Same sender name every time. Don’t alternate between “Marketing Team,” “Peter from Company,” and “Company Inc.” Pick one name and stick with it. Personal names (“Maria from Hermod”) typically perform 15-20% better than company names.

Same frequency. If you send every Tuesday, send every Tuesday. Your recipients need to know what to expect. Unpredictable frequency is the second biggest reason for unsubscribes (after irrelevant content).

Same quality level. One fantastic newsletter followed by three mediocre ones hurts more than four consistently good ones. Consistency in quality builds expectation.

Preview text is your second chance

Preview text is the 40-130 characters shown after the subject line in the inbox. Most people ignore it — letting the email client pull the first lines from the email body.

That’s a waste. Use preview text actively as a complement to the subject line:

  • Subject: “3 email mistakes you’re making right now”
  • Preview: “Mistake #2 is probably costing you 20% of your revenue”

Now you have two hooks instead of one.

Timing: When you send matters more than you think

Send timing can mean the difference between 18% and 28% open rate for the exact same content.

General benchmarks

DayBest forOpen rate index
TuesdayB2B, professional content115
WednesdayMixed lists110
ThursdayB2B and B2C112
SaturdayB2C, lifestyle content108
Monday/FridayGenerally avoid90-95

Time: 9-11am for B2B. 8-9am or 7-9pm for B2C. But these are averages — your list may differ.

Send time optimization

Advanced platforms can analyze when individual recipients typically open emails and send at the optimal time for each person. This increases open rates by 10-25% compared to blast sending.

If you don’t have that option, test it yourself: send the same email to two groups at two different times and compare.

Design: Less is more

The best newsletters look surprisingly simple. Fancy templates with multiple columns, animations, and heavy graphics generally perform worse than clean, simple design.

Mobile optimization is not optional

Over 60% of all emails are opened on mobile. If your newsletter doesn’t look good on an iPhone SE, it doesn’t look good for the majority of your recipients.

  • Single-column layout — the only thing that works consistently across devices
  • Font size minimum 16px — under 14px is unreadable on mobile
  • CTA buttons minimum 44x44px — that’s Apple’s recommendation for touch targets
  • Images under 600px wide and compressed — slow loading = lost readers

Plain text vs. HTML

Surprisingly, plain text emails often outperform HTML emails for B2B. They look like personal messages. Gmail and Outlook render them consistently. And they’re less likely to be caught by spam filters.

For B2C and e-commerce, HTML with product images and branding is typically necessary. But keep it simple — one hero image, clean typography, clear CTA.

Frequency: How often is too often?

There’s no magic frequency. But there is data:

  • Less than 1 email/week: Recipients forget you. Engagement drops.
  • 1-2 emails/week: Sweet spot for most. Enough to stay top-of-mind, not so much it annoys.
  • 3-4 emails/week: Can work for media, daily deals, and high-engagement niches. Requires every send to deliver real value.
  • Daily: Only if recipients have explicitly signed up for daily content.

What to do when open rates drop

Falling open rates are a symptom, not the disease. Check these things in order:

  1. Has your list grown quickly? New contacts often have lower engagement initially.
  2. Is your content still relevant? Ask your recipients directly with a survey.
  3. Is your frequency too high? Try reducing and see if engagement per email increases.
  4. Are there technical issues? Check your deliverability — maybe you’re landing in spam.
  5. Do you have inactive contacts on the list? Run a re-engagement campaign and clean up.

A checklist before you hit send

Use this checklist for every newsletter:

  • Subject line is under 50 characters and creates curiosity
  • Preview text is set manually and complements the subject line
  • Main point is in the first 3 lines
  • There’s only one primary CTA
  • Email looks good on mobile (test with preview)
  • All links work
  • Unsubscribe link is visible
  • Sender name and reply-to are correct
  • You’ve segmented recipients appropriately

That checklist takes 2 minutes. It can save you hundreds of unsubscribes.

Start with your next send

You don’t need to overhaul everything at once. Take the next email you’re about to send and:

  1. Write three subject line variants and pick the best one (even better: A/B test two of them)
  2. Move the main point up to the first three lines
  3. Remove all CTAs except one
  4. Test it on mobile before sending

Four changes. Five minutes of extra work. Measurable difference in your numbers.

Ofte stillede spørgsmål

What's a good open rate for newsletters?
It depends on industry, but generally 25-30% is good, 30-40% is strong, and above 40% is exceptional. B2B newsletters typically run 2-5 percentage points lower than B2C. More important than the absolute number is the trend — is your open rate going up or down over time?
When is the best time to send newsletters?
For B2B: Tuesday through Thursday between 9-11am performs best in most tests. For B2C: Saturday morning and Sunday evening are often strong. But your list is unique — test it yourself with send time optimization and A/B tests over 4-6 weeks.
How long should a newsletter be?
There's no ideal length, but the best newsletters follow one rule: one topic, one action. If you're covering one topic in depth, 800-1,200 words can work well. If you're curating multiple topics, keep each section under 100 words with clear links to read more.
Should I use images in my newsletters?
Use images intentionally. A single hero image can increase engagement, but many images increase load time and can trigger spam filters. Remember that many recipients have images disabled by default — your newsletter should make sense without images. Alt text matters.
How do I prevent my newsletters from going to spam?
Three things: 1) Technical setup — make sure SPF, DKIM, and DMARC are configured correctly. 2) List hygiene — remove inactive contacts regularly. 3) Content — avoid spammy words in subject lines, maintain a healthy text-to-image ratio, and always include an unsubscribe link.